This one needs very little tweaking to
Posted by kristin on Jul 30, 2010 in Canvas painting |
get it publish worthy. There are a few phrases that are a bit clunky, for example: “…each of us has in us the ability to create beauty on canvas. ” Also, the sentence, “A sketch book, a pencil and eraser, a canvas, your chosen paint colors and a few brushes. ” is only a partial sentence and needs to be either modified or incorporated into the previous sentence with a ; or :.
All in all, however, this is a very nice with good spelling, grammar, and punctuation.